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Who doesn't like Red Sonja, and her chainmail bikini? =P

I'll probably color this one.

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:iconaussie-gal:
I really like what you did with this piece. The background was drawn in really high detail, yet you've still managed not to draw too much attention away from the central figure. The sharpness of the figure contrasts really well with the softness of the background. I think it would look even better if you coloured only the foreground of the image and left the background in grey scale to enhance the contrast you've already got going on there.

The shading is extremely life like, especially on the hair, and it makes the entire thing that bit more believable. You've made effective use of some key art principles too, which is surprisingly rare.

Well done. :heart:
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:iconjonesmac2006:
A lovelly style and lots of impact here. I agree that more detail on the trees and texture on the boots, etc would help because the vegetation in the background is sucking up too much atention right now. All in all, though, a very stylish piece. I love her pose, her expression, and setting, and her armour is very stylish. The values are well executed and maybe the bright out lines could be extended into the foreground a little more with more shadows on the trees.I think this painting will look excellent in colour adding more depth to an already slick piece of art.
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:iconrothmir:
Hell Yeah!

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:iconfertelitytrashnapalm:
you're making a progress man,
last time i visited your gallery
i couldn't say it was good,
no I do.


good work,
there's a space,
normal proportions,
composition.

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:iconmishkahappy:
Ni-ce. Love her pose and the hair, your bg is also very good. :)

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:iconjosu-oh:
great use of shadows and lineart
:iconnorthgeorgiatattoos:
I would work on her expression. She is a warrior, she should have a proud and strong stance and expression

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Life is a fluid medium continually painted on the canvas of time.
:iconhoopman:
Love the carving on the tree!

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:iconpurren:
Nice work, I've always wanted a chainmail bikini myself haha!

Would love to see this in color. Also, she looks like she is going to cry, I dunno I would do something different with the face or at least the lips.
:iconferreson:
It looks like shes in a cave.
:iconscreamingdigital:
I'm digging the sword and the carving on the tree.

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:iconandreaxxx:
NIce work, I like the trees and the grass :)

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April 29, 2009
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